I liked that you had pictures of the things you were talking about. Also, you mentioned a wide variety of reasons why it was the perfect car. You talked about things from the gas mileage to you preference on color. But, I think at times you stumbled on your words. I think you can clean that up by slowing down a little (especially the beginning) and knowing your speech really well. Also, I think you should have a light in front of you so we can see the pictures and your face better.
Good job keeping eye contact and organizing your points. The arguments would be more convincing if you were a bit more animated and spoke slightly more clearly. Also, why did you lease instead of buy? And what besides the color and size makes it fit specifically to your needs and desires.
I liked that you had pictures of the things you were talking about. Also, you mentioned a wide variety of reasons why it was the perfect car. You talked about things from the gas mileage to you preference on color. But, I think at times you stumbled on your words. I think you can clean that up by slowing down a little (especially the beginning) and knowing your speech really well. Also, I think you should have a light in front of you so we can see the pictures and your face better.
ReplyDeleteGood job keeping eye contact and organizing your points. The arguments would be more convincing if you were a bit more animated and spoke slightly more clearly. Also, why did you lease instead of buy? And what besides the color and size makes it fit specifically to your needs and desires.
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